Thursday, August 6, 2009

'Stranded' by Pemita


SOS. His brawny hands had just finished lifting the stones into place. The thought of being the only survivor of the plane crash made him fervent to stay alive. He stretched his limbs and you could see his exposed physique. His features were angelic. He had a face like some ancient Greek sculpture. His eyes weren’t blue but violet and they glistened in the beam of the crescent moon. Although it had not rained the ground was weet. He gasped, and as he did he could see his own breath. It was cold. The wind was like a rope strapping tightly against his body. But it did not howl instead there was an ominous silence. He was stranded on this island, no food, no water. Alone. That was the worst part of all.
[To read the rest of the story leave a comment expressing what you like about this orientation]
Thank you

23 comments:

MS 3 said...

I enjoyed reading this orientation because the author creates a vivid image of the character and setting.

Anonymous said...

Hey that's my story!!!!YEAH!!
THANKS I ENJOYED WRITING IT...
OSOME!!!

MIITA:)

Mr Chung said...

I can see why your teacher published this piece of writing onto the class blog, Pemita. It's very powerful writing. I can't wait to read more from you.

MIITA said...

SHUA WAIT TILL MAI NEXT BOOK IS OUT.....HEHE:)DATS IN ABOUT 6 MONTHS TIME..

Unknown said...

hha!!
i liked th part when th plane crashed..=)

MIITA said...

That was cut out..hA

MS 3 said...

hi mitah i enjoyedp
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MS 3 said...

Hi everyone i dont get you mita what do you mean?

MS 3 said...

Hi everyone i dont get you mita what do you mean?

MS 3 said...

hi everyone Miss Aniterea is the best teacher in the whole wide world. HEEhee
MS3 rockz yeah!!!!!!!
polu and lupe heheheheh

MS 3 said...

luv ur story pemita bye
koia

MS 3 said...

pemmita yor story is so entertaining! l!!!!! Kiu

Anonymous said...

kan us lyk write mii name properly

LOOOPZ said...

pEMITA I BET THAT YOU ARE GOING TO BE AN AUTHOR WHEN YOU GROW UP

LOOOOPZZZZ

MIITA said...

NICE NAME LUPE AND OFF COURSE IM GONNA B AN AUTHOR, A PUBLISHER LYKS MII STORY, NOT THIS ONE THOUGH, THE BOOK IM WRITING AT HOME. SHE WANTS ME TO FINISH IT THOUGH BUT IM RUNNING OUT OF IDEAS.....I NEED MOA BOOKS 2 READ..

Anonymous said...

i was cool reading this orientation because the author has a good sense of humour

Anonymous said...

if you have any books-some cool ones you can recommend to tiresa\
please if u have any vampire books

GIVE IT TO ME OR MISS ANITEREA
PLEASE d!f!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

if you have any books-some cool ones you can recommend to tiresa\
please if u have any vampire books

GIVE IT TO ME OR MISS ANITEREA
PLEASE d!f!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

your a natural
you are going to famous when you grow up.

Anonymous said...

awesome story can you put the rest of it on???

Anonymous said...

miss aniterea kan u pls put da rest of it on???

Miss Hendricks said...

Awesome Pemita.....your imagination is outstanding......keep writing!!!!

Polu Da Gal said...

you are so right Miss Hendricks
mitah ur so like talented